I am a Year 8 learner in Room 3 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Tele'a.
I love your marine-based story! You had a few spelling mistakes and some of your sentences didn't make sense. Overall, it was a lovely story and hope you make more in the future.
I love your marine-based story! You had a few spelling mistakes and some of your sentences didn't make sense. Overall, it was a lovely story and hope you make more in the future.
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