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One day it was Christmas, but also my best friend's Birthday. Her name is Amelia.
That day all my friend’s were at my house, except for the Birthday Girl ( Amelia ).
We were at my house because we wanted to plan something for Amelia’s birthday.
We had a problem. The problem was that, of course it was Amelia’s birthday, but
it was also Christmas day at the same time. We had to make a solution. At first
we were planning on what to do for Amelia’s birthday. Second we had a problem and
now we need to make a solution. Hmmmmmmm? Says one of the members of BFF’s!!
We were at my house because we wanted to plan something for Amelia’s birthday.
We had a problem. The problem was that, of course it was Amelia’s birthday, but
it was also Christmas day at the same time. We had to make a solution. At first
we were planning on what to do for Amelia’s birthday. Second we had a problem and
now we need to make a solution. Hmmmmmmm? Says one of the members of BFF’s!!
What if we make a christmas present for Amelia’s Birthday. Yes, Yes! Says another member of our
Bff groups. Great idea! Says the leader of the group.
Bff groups. Great idea! Says the leader of the group.
3 of the members were making their own christmas present for Amelia’s birthday, each of us members
were done with the christmas present for our best friend. We were ready to give our present to our best
friend, But then we forgot one more thing, what? What did we forget about? Say one of the members.
were done with the christmas present for our best friend. We were ready to give our present to our best
friend, But then we forgot one more thing, what? What did we forget about? Say one of the members.
We forgot to wear a nice costume for Christmas Day and Amelia’s Birthday. Says the leader.
Ohhhhhhhh! Says the same member, again. Well then Let's get ready!!! Says the quietest member in our
group. We were finally ready to give our own Christmas present to Amelia on her birthday. We all walked
down to her house with Joy and surprised her with our christmas present. She was Excited, Happy and
had goosebumps all over her hands and legs. We knew she was going to open the presents up straight
away. Amelia jumped up and down as hard as she could with joy and was really grateful for us giving
christmas presents on her 12th year old Birthday. Me and my friends all asked her if she was allowed to
come with us to have 3 scoops of crispy jumbo ice cream, for each one of us. When she heard that we all
said 3 scoops of crispy jumbo ice cream for ourselves she knew it was going to be nice. So then she rushed
to her parents and asked them if she could go out with her friends because it was her birthday. Of course
her parents wouldn't say ‘NO!!!’ because it was her birthday and also they knew we were her best friends
since we were all little girls. So then her parents said, Yes! Of course you can go out with your friends!
Says Amelia’s dad. Make sure you guys are safe and don’t get runned over by a car!! Says the Mum!
OK! Says Amelia rushing out the door, We will stay safe! Bye love you! Says Amelia to her parents while
shutting the door with excitement. Me and my friends (including the birthday girl) went to buy our own
3 scoops of crispy jumbo of ice cream and went back home with fun and exhausting feelings. That was
the best day of my life! Says all the members of that together on the next day.
group. We were finally ready to give our own Christmas present to Amelia on her birthday. We all walked
down to her house with Joy and surprised her with our christmas present. She was Excited, Happy and
had goosebumps all over her hands and legs. We knew she was going to open the presents up straight
away. Amelia jumped up and down as hard as she could with joy and was really grateful for us giving
christmas presents on her 12th year old Birthday. Me and my friends all asked her if she was allowed to
come with us to have 3 scoops of crispy jumbo ice cream, for each one of us. When she heard that we all
said 3 scoops of crispy jumbo ice cream for ourselves she knew it was going to be nice. So then she rushed
to her parents and asked them if she could go out with her friends because it was her birthday. Of course
her parents wouldn't say ‘NO!!!’ because it was her birthday and also they knew we were her best friends
since we were all little girls. So then her parents said, Yes! Of course you can go out with your friends!
Says Amelia’s dad. Make sure you guys are safe and don’t get runned over by a car!! Says the Mum!
OK! Says Amelia rushing out the door, We will stay safe! Bye love you! Says Amelia to her parents while
shutting the door with excitement. Me and my friends (including the birthday girl) went to buy our own
3 scoops of crispy jumbo of ice cream and went back home with fun and exhausting feelings. That was
the best day of my life! Says all the members of that together on the next day.
The End!
Kia ora Kolopa,My name is Mata.I really like that your story it has capitals,Full stops and makes senses.My favourite part of this story is that it is Christmas and Amelia birthday.How did you come up with the idea for this story?
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